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#1 yingin

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Posted 03 September 2018 - 04:52 PM

Who's The Killer In The Back Seat?


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Part 1-Starting

A lady leaves the house one evening to have fun with her friends. She goes to a bar with his friends. The girls left the bar late at night to get alcohol and drove away from there. The ladies who went home on a deserted road noticed that a vehicle was coming back. The lady who drove faster than fear had been quite anxious along the way. The car in the back was always disturbing the woman with her selectors. Fortunately, the woman thought that the car in the back had a left signal. She was quite relieved when she saw the signal. in contrast, the vehicle in the back did not return even though it was signalling and continued to follow the lady. The very frightened woman was trying to think as much as she could to get rid of the car in the back. The woman, who did not think wisely with the effect of alcohol, finally found the best idea.

Part 2 – Events Are Beginning To Unfold

The idea that Lady, the hero of the story, came to her mind to get rid of the vehicle she was being chased was very nice. If she goes home and runs home, she calls the police and thinks she can get out of this car. Fortunately, the young lady came home safely after the terrible night, and she ran to her house without locking her car. After we got out of the car, there was a voice in the back of the car saying, "lock your car and call the police." She started to think why the man in the back said that, but she was a little bit relieved to get home. He finally called the police and waited quietly.

Part 3 – Unveil The Mystery

Finally, with the police coming, things started to open up. In fact, the gentleman in the back car was stalking her to save her life, not to scare her. Because the man said that every time he made a signal, there was a shadow in her back window and a clever in his hand. In fact, when the man made the signal, he was trying to hide in order not to appear to be the owner of this shadow. Finally, the police were surrounded by the car and the person in the back seat was trying to get caught. Suddenly the person who got out of the car disappeared into the forest. And who was that? Was that a human being? Or was that actually another entity? The police couldn't find the trail of the escaped person.  The answer to the question Who's the murderer in the back seat seems to never be solved.

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Posted 03 September 2018 - 07:49 PM

Hello and welcome to Paranormal Soup :D

I really enjoyed your short story :yes: As you might have noticed I have removed your link to your blog website and moved your thread to our "Let's go Blogging" forum.

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Posted 04 September 2018 - 01:05 PM

thanks :)

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Posted 04 September 2018 - 04:32 PM

You 're welcome :D
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Posted 06 September 2018 - 01:35 PM

Staying Home Alone


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Part 1

Hi, I'm Bethany. I want to tell you something that happened to me when I was 13. School was over and we were on vacation. My little brother Dianne was very good at gymnastics, so my parents recorded her in a gym. This is good for her, but it's not very good for me. Because I was staying home alone when my sister went to the gym.  My mother warned me not to open the door to anyone during the day. My mother and my sister went out and I kept studying. A half hour or 1 hour had passed. I was tired of studying, so I went to the living room and sat down to read some books. As I was sitting quietly, suddenly I jumped out of my couch with the sound from the kitchen. I was afraid of even small voices. I was so curious about what that sound was, but I didn't dare go. I was trying to sit on the couch without moving or making a sound, and I was praying that it would go away.

Silent Waiting-Part 2

I kept quietly waiting, and finally I realized that the sound was gone.  I was thirsty for a while, but I chose to stay dehydrated because I was afraid to go to the kitchen.  Then I realized there was water in my bag. I got the water fast. I was scared when it was quiet, so I wanted to turn on the TV.  But I couldn't find the remote, and I ran to my room at once.  As soon as I got to my room, I went to bed and waited under the duvet for hours.  I looked outside with the tip of my eye, and the lid of my closet was open. First, I thought it was influence of the wind, but it was impossible. Cause even though my sister's locker was closer to the outside, hers was closed. I waited under the bed as if my heart would stop until my parents came.

They're Finally Here-Part 3

At last, the door opened and my parents came. I ran to my parents and told them one by one.  My mother laughed too much, but there was not much to laugh about.  My mom said You had a dream or something, but I'm sure it wasn't a dream that I experienced. Then I took my mother to the kitchen to prove it, and she said that I left her in the morning, and there was nothing strange.  Then I took it to show that my closet door was open, and I saw that my closet door was not open. It's impossible to understand how this happened. I started to go to the gym with my brother because I was afraid to stay alone at home after this time. But I still don't understand what happened in that house that day. And I'm still so scared.


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Posted 07 September 2018 - 02:13 PM

CURSE OF BABY DEMON + 18


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I reside in Istanbul at the age of 24. What I'm about to say happened six years ago. Actually, I'm from Ankara, and I'm going to tell you, K*** It happened in his village. I used to go to the village with my family every summer. The old people of the village told me that the village had a dark past. I was so scared when I was listening. At the top of the village there were ancient caves. In addition, at the peak of one of the hill, there was an open place on top of which was covered with rocks. A saint had a supposed shrine. Maybe those who knew the old highland houses were like those highland houses. think clearly without a roof. It was impossible to call it a shrine, but that's what they would tell us. For years, villagers tried to make a door to this shrine, but every time they did it the next morning, the villagers found the door in a way that was demolished. There's still no door right now. Of course, we were afraid that we were young at the time, but we wanted to go and look at it at night. We decided one evening and we were going into this shrine in the middle of the night. My friends ' names were Euphrates and Ismael. It was around 1:00 a.m. and we started walking up the hill. As we were going up, a piece of rock rolled over from us at 25 to 30 inches. But we kept going up the Hill without much attention. We came to the shrine. Ismail entered the shrine. We were studying the door part with the Euphrates and a voice was heard. Sounds like coins crashing into each other but the sound was very strong. Ismael ran out from the inside. He shouted, " let's get out of here." It was like he saw something inside. We didn't really want to go with the Euphrates. We just got here because. Ismael said, "they don't want us here". Okay, we said We'd come back in the day, and when we turned back, we saw something like a shadow coming close to us in the dark. As we got closer, we started to see a silhouette. We were just gonna run, so it shouted, " stop." Approached us with a stick in its hand. He was a 70-year-old uncle. But we didn't know. It was obvious he wasn't a peasant. He said, What Are you doing here? Ismael began to run down the hill. We ran after him. Looking back, we saw the old man disappeared behind us. We ran down to the village.  When we came to the entrance of the village Ismael breathless in the shrine "coming" he heard a whisper, and so he started to run. We didn't want to believe it. The next morning we decided to collect more information about this shrine. We tried to talk to the old people of the village.  However, everyone was telling us what we already know. There was an uncle Mustafa who was declared insane by the villagers who lived alone in the village. And as we passed by the gate of his house,

he said to us, "What have you done? they will come for you." he shouted.

Euphrates said "What have we done, uncle Mustafa"

Uncle Mustafa showed Ismael with his left hand and said, "First you will come to you and then to all of you."

I said, " Who will come."He said "go get out of here"  and entered his house. How would the village madman know what we were doing yesterday?

Ismael turned to us and said, "he knows."

I said, "Ismael, is there anything you haven't told us?"

Euphrates said "Don't be afraid of yourself"

Ismael said, "When I entered there yesterday, There was a doll standing on the floor, I did not notice at first, I pressed on him, and the voices began to come after him without knowing."

I said "So ?"

Ismael said, "I don't know, but it happened after him."

As soon as I could remember, the village's priest  was the same. We went to the priest and told him what happened to us. The priest told us about uncle Mustafa.  Many years ago, uncle Mustafa attended the wedding of demons on that hill and had fun with uncle Mustafa until morning. No one has heard from uncle Mustafa for about 3 months.  even though he told the villagers what happened to him when he came to the village, the villagers claimed he was crazy.

I asked the priest , "is there anyone who knows the history of this shrine better?"

Priest said there was a man in the village of M*** called Dulgon, and we could learn more from him.

I took my grandfather's car, and we headed for that village. After a half-hour trip, we arrived in the village. We asked a little bit, and we found a Dulgon uncle. We knocked on the door of his house. a 20-year-old girl opened the door.

We said, "We want to meet uncle Dulgon."

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To be continued...

Edited by yingin, 07 September 2018 - 02:15 PM.


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Posted 12 September 2018 - 03:53 PM

Dulgon was actually an old priest.The priest said "welcome" and invited us in. Like he was waiting for us. We all looked at each other.

Euphrates said, "our village priest has called, they will come," and we entered.

I looked into the house with the tip of the eye. It's a little creepy house from the outside and the inside. Without saying anything, the priest said, "I know what happened to you in the shrine."
I said crud. Euphrates said, "What do you know," and the priest looked at Ismael and said, "you killed their child."  looked at me and Euphrates, "You did not go to their door and enter, but they were disturbed by you." The priest said " The man who came to you was a member of the demon tribe. If you hadn't run away, he'd have taken you on a mountain and you couldn't return to the village for a while." I was scared. I was listening to what the priest said. I said to myself, " How does he know so much?" I was asking. Ismail said, "What I printed was a doll. How is it?"

Priest said "That baby was actually not there, When you stepped on this evil asset and killed it, you realized it was the doll."

Ismail wasn't sure of himself and he said " I don't remember"

Priest said "After you killed the Demon baby you killed, you just saw it as an object because they showed it to you."

I said, "What are we supposed to do, priest?"

The priest said to the girl who opened the door, "bring it."

She brought us an old basin, and it was filled with water. The priest first wrote something on paper and threw it in the water. The priest then wrote something on three different papers. He turned the papers into amulets and taped them.

The priest said, "take these with you and leave now."

I still had a lot of questions in my head. How did this priest know so much ? We left the house. Everybody was looking at each other.

Ismael suddenly said to me, " What do we do?" In 2 days we had a whole different life. Was getting a little worse every second.

Euphrates said "Let's call the demons and apologize. Maybe we can get rid of them."

The girl who opened the door at first looked at us and said, "You're not going to get rid of it." and she kept walking fast. We got in the car and headed for the village. On the one hand we were thinking about what to do and on the other hand we were thinking about how to fix things. We've reached the village. everybody went home. it was evening time. I never told anyone about what happened to us. I started to hear noises like 11: 00 at night. Everyone slept early because we were in the village. I was beginning to hear voices. when I turned my head I saw a shadow in the window.  What's going on? Who's there? when I said, I saw the window exploding and I screamed. There was a glass fracture all over the place. Everyone came to the room. They were asking what happened. I told my grandfather what I saw. My grandfather read a few prayers and blew them into the water. Then I drank the water and everybody went to bed again. I remember very well at night at 3:21. I had a phone call. I saw a circle in front of me and the circle was rotating. It suddenly turned into an ordinary hand-made wooden stairs . The stairs came towards me, and the steps on me started to collapse one by one. I felt the pain of every piece of wood that fell on me. The pieces of wood that fell on my back didn't run out. I was trying to scream, but I wasn't making any noise. I grabbed the glass by the bed and threw it on the wall to make a sound. The sound of the glass breaking the house woke up again. Everyone in the house came back to my room. I was thinking to myself, What's going on?

My grandfather came to me, "son, are you okay?" I didn't want to say anything, but I didn't want them to leave me. I didn't want to be alone again.

I said, "nothing, grandpa, but I don't want to sleep in this room alone."

Anyway, my grandfather slept in the same room with me that day.

When it was morning, I called the Euphrates and said, "we need to see each other."

"Yes, I have something to tell you,"  Euphrates said. Then I was gonna call the Ismael, and he called me.

Ismael said to me, "do you know what happened to me last night?" that's when I realized that we all had something at night.

I said " I can imagine and meet me at the entrance of the village." When I arrived at the village Entrance, the Euphrates had already arrived there. When I got there.

Euphrates "they were going to kill me last night," he said.

I said, "I know I've lived the same as the ." Ismael appeared across the road. He's limping.

Euphrates said, " They scared us, but they messed up Ismael." Ismael took off his pants without saying anything. His leg was all purple.

Ismael said, " I stepped on that demon with this leg, and yesterday my parents went to the highlands and stayed home alone. All night I heard voices coming through the doors and I saw a variety of silhouettes until morning,"

To be continued...

Edited by yingin, 12 September 2018 - 03:54 PM.